AHS 8300 Wilmington University Wk 11 Lack of Adequate Human Services Thesis Paper

Question Description

Please submit your third thesis draft for review and critique by the course instructor. This draft should have all sections completed for Instructor critique and comments. This draft is worth 10% of your grade.

(Be sure to check your formatting and APA 7 requirements for headings, pagination and references.)

Thank you for your Second Thesis Draft.Please see the attached document with my notes. Overall, your formatting looked much better. I made some edits to your Table of Contents. Please follow the pattern listed for Chapters I & II for the remainder of the chapters and subheadings. I saw that you were able to correct the majority of errors from your previous draft. However, I did note some additional grammatical errors in the new content provided. I also took a very close look at your References and noted some minor errors regarding the proper APA 7 formatting. Please be careful as you prepare your References. Remember to use Citefast and copy the references into your paper or another word document. We have only three weeks remaining and you still have much to include in your paper. Chapters III, IV, and V require additional work. I need to see additional information regarding the research study or studies you chose to conduct your research. I need to see who was interviewed, how many surveys were sent out, how many people responded, and why they responded the way they did. In Chapter IV I need to see more information about the research results and why they are significant to your research. Finally, Chapter V needs to bring everything together, in a final discussion about what was gained from the research, what your conclusions are, and your Recommendations for not only future research but for how to change the environment and improve services for children conceived in rape.Your chapter introductions are a good start, but I’m still looking for more content in your paper. Keep building upon what you have.

The professor feedback and recommendation please review the feedback and please follow all instructions. I starting to lose points.

Please also review the correction the professor made in the paper and auto accept it in the paper with All Mark up instead of simple Simple Mark Up.

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