West Virginia Junior College Morgantown CEO Keystone Holdings Inc Memorandum
Question Description
- The final draft of the memo is due . Please make the necessary changes to your memo based on my comments on your rough draft. Copy and Paste my my comments on your rough draft into the text box on Blackboard so I can reference them when grading your final memo.
Comments:
-see the PowerPoint for heading and alignment directions.
-No indenting paragraphs. Paragraphs are too long. Use short paragraphs. New idea = New paragraph.
-You need to incorporate techniques of memo writing…headings, bulleted lists, short paragraphs that lend itself to readability.
-First paragraph is very wordy and many errors. See the directions for the first paragraph.
-??You need to condense this to 2 pages using only the most important details from the article. You also may use examples from the article to illustrate your point.
-See the directions for where to put “Attached : article title…: No reference at the end.
-proofread for errors and awkward wording.
This is the document prvided by professor: https://gofile.io/d/7SMMGS
My draft and source is attached
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