AHS 8300 WU Week 13 Lack of Adequate Human Services Thesis Paper
Question Description
Please submit your initial draft of your Final Thesis Submission for review and feedback prior to final submission.
Thank you for your Week 12 draft submission.I was able to review your paper yesterday and this morning. Overall, you are making great strides towards getting to a finished product.
Please note that I fixed your pagination, so it is correct. I also aligned your first pages of the Thesis and added page breaks throughout your paper, mostly between chapters. At the end of each chapter, you need to have a conclusion paragraph or paragraphs. The purpose of the conclusion statement is to summarize the current chapter and provide a transition statement to the next chapter. I have provided you with some starter sentences that you just need to finish. You may use the language that I have included.
To date, you have 22 references. I would like for you to have closer to 30 references in your paper. You also need to provide more in-text citations. Remember that any time you’re writing about a position, it needs to be cited. I made several notes on your paper. You may want to add additional information to Chapter III. I also did some quick research regarding “Community-Based Sociotherapy” from Rwanda. I provided you with a web link in your paper. Please add information regarding this community-based support in your paper. (This link can also be added to your references.) As much as there is a gap in services, this appears to be a program that is working.
Please check the APA 7 Formatting for your Figures.This is good information, I just want you to be sure that it is formatted correctly. I provided some directions for you in your paper.
I know that you’re working on Chapter V and the Abstract. Please strive to have these completed with your next draft.
Because of the page breaks, you’ll want to double-check the page numbers listed in the Table of Contents to be sure they are accurate.
Again, I can see that your thesis is coming together. I look forward to receiving your next draft.Please let me know if you have any questions.Have
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